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Chapter One
Chapter Two
Chapter Three
Chapter Four
Chapter Five
Chapter Six
Chapter Seven
Chapter Eight
Chapter Nine
Chapter Ten
Chapter Eleven
Chapter Twelve
Chapter Thirteen
Chapter Fourteen
Chapter Fifteen
Chapter Sixteen
Chapter Seventeen
Chapter Eighteen
Chapter Nineteen
Chapter Twenty
Chapter Twenty One
Chapter Twenty Two
Chapter Twenty Three
Chapter Twenty Four
Chapter Twenty Five
Chapter Twenty Six
Chapter Twenty Seven
Chapter Twenty Eight
Chapter Twenty Nine
Chapter Thirty
Chapter Thirty One
Chapter Thirty Two
Chapter Thirty Three
Chapter Thirty Four
Chapter Thirty Five
Chapter Thirty Six
Chapter Thirty Seven
Chapter Thirty Eight
Chapter Thirty Nine
Chapter Forty
Chapter Forty One
Chapter Forty Two
Chapter Forty Three
Chapter Forty Four
Chapter Forty Five
Chapter Forty Six
Chapter Forty Seven
Chapter Forty Eight
Chapter Forty Nine
Chapter Fifty
Chapter Fifty One
Chapter Fifty Two
Final Chapter
Please retain that all my works are my own and I retain sole right over these works of fiction on my blog so please do not attempt to reproduce or alter my work and pass it off as your own.
jas ur grt i m ur regular reader and dark paradise just love it.and the rabba ve moments awww.
ReplyDeleteOmg thank you Aditi that's so sweet :) I'm really glad you like it. Thanks so much for reading it I'll try my best to keep it good lol :)
DeleteDear
ReplyDeleteJas .I love IPKKND and the way you write the story is great.Last night my sis read it she said it's fairly nice.
P.S. You should publish the story as fb notes. I believe you'll have more admirer.
Thank you again :) I'll think about the fb notes thing but I have a lot of work right now so I wont get around to doing it for a while :/ thank you though :)
DeleteThe chapters are really good - and I look forward to reading them!
ReplyDeleteHowever the story is moving on far too quickly and I think you have totally changed ASR's character beyond belief - he has turned into a chocolate hero - all melting and too far removed from the IPKKND character
Hey, thank you. I know I changed Arnav a lot but when I started this out I made it out that I planned for it to be how I wanted Arnav to be, how I imagine him to develop when he falls in love but I see where you're coming from. The story is quite fast paced also because a lot of people missed the whole cute scenes so I had to speed that up more than I wanted to.
Deleteplease write more
Deleteplease continue and write more outstanding and brilliant work very creative
ReplyDeletehey jas i find your story really really interesting and i just want to know when you are going to update and write on and i love the way you have changed arnavs charachter true genius. so brilliant i wish all this would happen in the real episodes true genius.
ReplyDeleteHi omg sorry I haven't updated my sister's home from university so I was spending time with her and haven't been on this till now, I'll either update later tonight or tomorrow morning. Thank you for your comments though it means a lot :) you are genuinely so sweet and so kind, just thank you!
Deleteno problem although i wish you were the writer of the tv series episodes you are too good
DeleteHaha I don't think I'm nearly that good but thanks anyway. I'm glad you like it that much :).
Deleteplease update brilliant loved it hope you enjoy writing it as much as we enjoy reading it thank you
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, I do love writing it and love everyone for reading it :)
Deleteplz update
ReplyDeleteSorry for the lack of updates my workload at college has been crazy because exams are starting soon. But I've updated now and its a long one. I plan to update tomorrow because I don't want to leave it on a cliff hanger, hope you like it x :)
Deleteloved it update soon but also focus on your exams
ReplyDeleteI just updated now :) and haha yes I will focus on my exams.
Deletebrilliant storyline loved it
ReplyDeleteThank you :)
Deletebrill update soon jas ur great at writing keep it up hon
ReplyDelete:) Thanks.
Deletestarted reading this the other day and I have to say your such a good writer! I absolutely love reading your stories and can't wait for you to update next :)
ReplyDeleteI'm actually getting quite confused with this story and what comin on the television lol if only this is what was coming on the television
That is so sweet :) thank you sooo much! Haha I'm glad that you like it so much, I'm about to write the next update. Genuinely cannot say thanks enough for reading my writing and actually liking it! Just thank you :)
Deleteaww it's ok :) x
Deleteloved it continue please ur doing great
ReplyDeletei am in total awe...your writing is way too beautiful! the first thing i do in the morning is read your blog n it olny gets better with each passing day! great job..keep going..
ReplyDelete:) Thank you so much! Omg wow I'm in awe from your dedication, that's intense like wow. Seriously thank you :) I can't believe how much you like it. Haha keep reading it and I'll keep writing lol :)
Deletecannot wait for more....even though its a really fast pace, almost like it more than the show itself. i think the show is just toooo slow....great job on the writing. in my opinion, the directors should thank you, reading your blog makes us fans not soo mad at the directors for draggin the story sooo much!...
ReplyDelete:) Oh gosh, wow, thank you! I try to update as much as possible but with exams and stuff its a bit hard to keep up to the demand sometimes lol. Seriously though thank you so much, that is so kind of you to say and haha that'd be the day, the directors thanking me, might be taking it a bit too far lol. But I'm glad you like it so much :) I agree the show has its lulls where I want it to progress, but we love it anyway :). Thanks again and keep reading :)
DeleteDear Jas,
ReplyDeleteThank for making these terrific and wonderful stories. You FINALLY made my mom read somthing she really enjoys. :) . You are a great writer keep it up!
From: your greatest fans
Hi there,
DeleteYou are so sweet thank you so much. I am really happy you like it so much and that your mom likes it too. Thank you to her also :)! Thank you both I'm so lucky to have such lovely fans such as yourselves!
Jas x
hey jas loved your updates actually my internet was down so i couldn't get on to read your story but now that i have read it just like to say loved it keep it up :)
ReplyDeletehi jas i'm daying to read your next updates when you going to do updates
ReplyDeleteHi :)
DeleteErm I'm planning on doing updates tomorrow so keep an eye out for them :)
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ReplyDeleteplz continue love your story
ReplyDeleteHey do you have the link for the site where my ff is being copied? I don't really want to update while there is someone reproducing my work. If you could give me the link I could attempt to resolve this issue and then update. Thank you so much :)
Deletehey jas i cant remember where i found it but i will try to look for it as i really want you to continue if i find it i will defiantly give you the link:)
ReplyDeleteThanks so much, have you tried checking your internet history around the time you read it? They usually have all the links you've accessed. I know it seems really unnecessary but I just don't like the idea that every time I spend my time and energy writing an update someone else just copies and pastes it. Thanks anyway :)
Deleteactually my sister cleared the history after she went on it after me so sorry i will try to look for it and no need to thank me i understand what you mean about you using your own brain to think of the idea and somebody else taking the credit i wouldn't like it either i'll get back to you tomorrow :) :) xxx
ReplyDeleteJas please upload ast as possible pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeee please please
ReplyDeleteI just uploaded, I am sorry to have made you all wait so long and I'm really grateful for you guys being patient and loyal. I hope you like the update and thanks again! :)
Deletehey jas :) im a frequent reader and i love your work!! will you be updating soon?
ReplyDeleteHey Abi, thank you! :) I just updated now. :)
DeleteI <3 this fanfic. Its soooooo amazing!!!! Is there going to be a chapter 48?? Thanks for the work that you put into this... its really fun to read!
ReplyDeleteHey sorry I only just saw this message now! Yes, I've published chapter 48 and I will continue to update unless I state otherwise in the future, the updates will be patchy timewise as I have exams at the moment, but I will try to update frequent and often :) Thanks for reading :)
Deletetake ur tym...but plzz don't stop writing
ReplyDeletey did u say tke ur tym!!!
Deletehe actuallly iz. plz telll uz wen da next update iz
plzzzzz
update sooon please im gettin impatient. n u betta mke sure its long plzzz
DeleteThank you Cul Shats, don't worry I wont I wont stop writing I have just been preoccupied with exams. Maliha I updated now, its not very long but I don't have a lot of time for updates at the moment, sorry. I finish on Thursday and will make a long update then. Thank you both for reading :)
Deletethank u very much. its awesome
ReplyDeleteHaha thanks glad you like it :)
Deletethnk u!!!! :D
ReplyDeleteAwh thank you! I'm so happy you liked it, I just updated now :)
Deleteplz update soon!!!!!!!!plzzzzzzz!!!!!!!! :D
ReplyDeleteThanks for all your patience, I just updated now so I hope you like it :)
Deleteso many people write about arshi...but u r exceptional!!!dark paradise is d best!!!!!!!! :D
ReplyDeleteThis is genuinely so sweet, I cannot thank you enough but still, thank you so so much! :) x
Deletehey jas!!!!!!!!plz update soon.....we r waiting........... :D
ReplyDeleteHaha, sorry about the wait but I just updated now! :)
Deletethnx!!!!!!!!!!!!!
DeleteJas... please add an Epilogue to this FF :( Pretty pretty please...
ReplyDelete- Ravneet :)
Love u loads <3
yep ur writing is very amazing cant wait 4 sum more
ReplyDeletecant wait to read yur work on arnav and khushi. just discovered you through a ff recommendation page on IF.
ReplyDeletei read your story dark paradise and really liked it. had a enjoyable time reading it. it was a nice piece of work.
ReplyDeleteWritten well... but Arnav never really makes up to Khushi properly in any stories....he 'll definitely take khushi with him bcs she's pregnant... he wants the child not khushi...
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